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Kinda getting back into spriting?
And, well, eating reminded me of this, so..



It's been about six months x:

his pose looks akward

It's cheese.

What kind of game is this? Is this some sort of fan game you made or something?

(12-16-2009, 05:23 PM)E-Man Wrote: [ -> ]What kind of game is this? Is this some sort of fan game you made or something?

Just so you know not everything that is posted on this section needs to be from games. This part of the forum is to get critics on sprites you have made.

Really nice but the leg on the back looks very awkward, it's like it's not connected to anything.

ah, so its a mockup.

well, ther's not much to say besides that the character's anatomy doesnt seem to work really well. even for a cheese.

Just noticed that he looks more like a moon than cheese because the top left side is cut off and makes the body of the character look more like a moon. I know you were trying to achieve the hole texture cheese has but I suggest that instead of chopping it off you make it a shadow and have the circle complete.

(12-16-2009, 06:21 PM)Mabelma Wrote: [ -> ]

(12-16-2009, 05:23 PM)E-Man Wrote: [ -> ]What kind of game is this? Is this some sort of fan game you made or something?

Just so you know not everything that is posted on this section needs to be from games. This part of the forum is to get critics on sprites you have made.

Really nice but the leg on the back looks very awkward, it's like it's not connected to anything.

Hmmmm... Alright... I can understand that answer...

For the scene that this guy has made, I say that he did rather fine.... However, I think the background needs some work...

(12-16-2009, 06:34 PM)Mabelma Wrote: [ -> ]Just noticed that he looks more like a moon than cheese because the top left side is cut off and makes the body of the character look more like a moon. I know you were trying to achieve the hole texture cheese has but I suggest that instead of chopping it off you make it a shadow and have the circle complete.

It's based on Cheese like this:


Funnily enough, it was originally the OTHER part of that cheese.

I love history.

This topic makes me lol, am I really that old..?