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Mueh.


I stare at the cold day,
Through the frosted screen.
In the snow she stands,
A figure too seldom seen.

I forget to breathe,
For just a moment.
Pound the glass.
And immediately lament.

She looks at me,
Shakes her head,
Then turns away.
My heart feels dead.



No real... form, I guess.

I really like the first part. The rest of it kinda, well, sucks. The rythem is inconsistent and it stops rhyming half way through.

I really like it! Very melancholy.