Nyaawww... you guys make me blush
Damn! that fat arm was hard to sort out!
Left side of the body seems kinda indented.
I know, its awful.
Now the eye seems messed up too.
I struggled to get the eye right to fit inside the outline, which is why its eye got messed up. So I decided that he could look better with the other eye slightly up
(our)left side of the plasma really bugs me. I think its the fact that the white parts aren't connected. That animation looks really lazy IMO.
animations should never be lazy edits. You need to put a lot of effort in them, or else it won't look good.
Ok, i edited the second and third poses
EDIT: is anyone else struggling to see the second pose?
Yes.
*lengthens post to stop breaking the rules*
Still reeks of lazy animation IMO.
I think the plasma just looks kinda cheap. At least make the top pointy so it doesn't look like it's just a coating of jelly. And the "sparks" on the sides look too different. The one on the right is good but the left one, not as much.
I did a quick edit according to what you said. It's only quick, mind, and I will probably do a full edit tomorrow.
EDIT:In case anyone is wondering, this is how it would look animated;
(sorry about it being slightly blurred, but thats what pivot does to my sprites)