Better, but I was thinking more like this:
I think I made a couple other little edits as I went, but rounded mouth and proportions of the legs/feet were the main things I changed. I moved the head down one pixel as well.
The cheeks on the back poses are really angular and flat, so maybe change that too.
fixed up the back sprites and edited the forward ones accordingly.
I'm considering Yoshi Finished. Next up is Captain Falcon:
Kinda related but not directly to the project: I was looking threw some old stuff i had saved on cds and i found some of my earlier sprite works:
The Horror. finding this made me very happy because of how much ive improved just thought id toss these monstrosities out there for everyone to see if you stick with it you get good
Yeah, Yoshi's done.
Captain Falcon has a bunch of things to fix, but I need to go to bed now and can't post till tomorrow evening, but I'll give some crits then.
And WOW. That is some monumental progress right there. How long has it been since then? I also find it funny that you've been doing this Smash RPG sprite thing since all that time ago. THAT is dedication to a project.
revamped the idle stance with more shading and highlights,
did some walking poses more edits to helmet and shoulder pad, also some idle sides.
I made those in 2005 so its been a 5 year improvement trek o.o I'm kinda surprised I've been doing this so long myself!
Update BUMP crappy back idle. i want the insignia to look better but to cram such detail into such a small space ehhhhhhhhh any thoughts?
OK Guys I did the back walk frames, but still need some C+C
this guy is going slower than Donkey Kong!
his helmet should be rounder
Sorry for the lack of updates, i haven't had the drive to do these lately. anyways here are some side poses, this will complete the captain falcon sprite, but as always please let me know what you guys think i wont add him to the finished until i hear back for some people on this.
(05-16-2010, 07:20 PM)Solink Wrote: [ -> ] (04-18-2010, 11:18 AM)Solink Wrote: [ -> ]his helmet should be rounder
I tried to make it rounder but i just didn't know where you were talking about do you mean the side poses? the back,front?
Thanks for the help Solink now that the helmet is rounded is there anything else that pops out as needing to be fixed?
I don't see anything else that needs work :]
I guess you can work on the next character
sounds good to me, Next up is Ness.