I'm bumping this because It was updated a long time ago, and almost no one replied to it.
It's not that good, but on the other hand it's not that bad.
Umm, that isn't really helping...
How would I make it better in your opinion?
I believe SmithyGCN had a stunning Final Destination that he never finished back at PT.
Edit: Found it.
![[Image: f_FinalDestinm_cf36037.gif]](http://img33.picoodle.com/img/img33/4/2/7/f_FinalDestinm_cf36037.gif)
it looks very DS-ish. I could see it on a DS Smash Bros game because it looks almost like a simple textured model.
balladofwindfishes Wrote:it looks very DS-ish. I could see it on a DS Smash Bros game because it looks almost like a simple textured model.
I'm going to die of lack of C+C. Can someone please give me something to work on? And I really don't get why fireshock had to post that stage here anyways......I don't see how It really fits at all in this topic, whether it is better or not.
Before anyone else posts, please look back at my first post, so you know what you are criticizing...
I posted that because of this statement.
Whale55 Wrote:Ok, I don't think anyone has ever submitted a final destination stage custom from brawl yet,
Cshad Wrote:Its extremely underdetailed, and thier is big blotches of shading
I already did that Cshad. There is practically nothing more I can/will do to fix that up(unless you can explain a little bit more, instead of just saying it generally). Also, you spelt there wrong.
Ok, I can completely get what you mean fireshock, but I don't think it was ever submitted.
I'm looking more for something I can look at that will make it look better. Also, I don't plan on going into more detail on the stage itself.
Whale55 Wrote:I already did that Cshad. There is practically nothing more I can/will do to fix that up(unless you can explain a little bit more, instead of just saying it generally). Also, you spelt there wrong.
Ok, I can completely get what you mean fireshock, but I don't think it was ever submitted.
I'm looking more for something I can look at that will make it look better. Also, I don't plan on going into more detail on the stage itself.
Ok here is what is wrong: It is extremely under detailed, see that Awesome final destination that Fireshock posted, you should use that to your advantage! Look at that as a REF, that is the best REF you have right now, also it lacks shading in the black areas, and youve got blotches of colors in spots that they dont belong, on the colored areas the shading needs more contrast, and add some AA to the corners. Point of light is needed to make a shine if there is going to be sunset. You need better colors too, and one more thing get rid of the un-needed colors. There is not much else I can say, also USE SMITHYGCN'S Final destination for a REF, best thing you have for improvements.
Thank you CoolYoshi.
Also, If I did use another final destination as a reference, wouldn't it be a bit like copying?
Whale55 Wrote:Thank you CoolYoshi.
Also, If I did use another final destination as a reference, wouldn't it be a bit like copying?
All I can say is use that Final Destination, Fireshock gave you a gift, now you use it to improve.
Quote:I believe SmithyGCN had a stunning Final Destination that he never finished back at PT.
I hope SmithyGCN doesn't mind then.......
XD your new version has a gradiented part, you shouldn't do that, way too many colors and actually Smithy's uses way less colors than yours.
Don't gradient, shade.
Ok, thanks again. I'm going to be a bit busy this week, so the update won't be for a while. I'll post the results after I'm done.