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Ok, I don't think anyone has ever submitted a final destination stage custom from brawl yet, so I made one yesterday. It isn't perfect, but.........

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If there is anything I should add to it before I submit it, please tell me here.

Yes, I know it says ripped, but I won't be uploading a new sheet until I get some more criticism.

Nice. There's just one little thing off about it, but I can't put my finger on it...hmmm...

Awesome, but I think it could be a bit longer.

Maybe.........Yeah.

Anyone else think it is too short?

Its extremely underdetailed, and thier is big blotches of shading

Ok, i guess I'll work on that then.

ripped?

Yes. He ripped this.
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TPoe Wrote:ripped?

No, this isn't a rip.
I customly made this.


Things to do:
1) Make Stage Longer
2) Add More Detail

Anything else?

*pssst* Your sheet says you ripped this. <.<;;

Not good when your sheet contradicts you or vice versa.

http://img395.imageshack.us/img395/2295/...ionbc9.png


I improved it a bit. It also has the final destination picture on it.

WOA! It does say ripped, doesn't it. Sorry about that then, I'll fix that.

The link at the top of this post still says ripped, but the fixed version is on my computer.

EDIT: Gosh I am stupid! I had no clue.

very good, but the pink red background makes it look bad (:D) keep up the good work

the background? Or the diamond in the center.

the background. red pink looks bad with the stage

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(hey, it still says ripped)

Yeah, I'm too lazy to upload it again.

At least until I edit it enough.

EDIT: I changed the background to violet.