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Yes,i'm still gonna work on the feets..I don't like them very much.
And the outline gets more collors than black.


Update 1:

The mouth and the eyes has been changed.
The lines near the arms are gone.
And it got now red cheaks.

Update 2!


Update 3!




Can this come on the website?

I like it.

I think you should make the hands a bit, I don't know. Puffier?


I don't know what it is about the hands, but there is something that could be fixed with them.

It isn't a very big deal anyways.

I think they look pretty good. they are kind of simple and plain though. I still like them. Oh and by the way, you spelled custom wrong

I wil change it when my update is ready.
But,like i sad...I'm noob in English.

I think you should do some other face expressions that can be put on kirby's face.

How about trying to do kirby sad, mad, or sick? Or really happy?

he looks like he is kissing someone

Yes,i was already thinking to do a and mouth.
Mayby a kirby

after you finish all that, maybe you could add the red, blue, and green versions. like on ssbb.

you clearly not getting the right C&C

it sucks

needs more contrast, a better lineart
his face doesn't look like kirby

skink Wrote:you clearly not getting the right C&C

it sucks

needs more contrast, a better lineart
his face doesn't look like kirby

^^he knows what he's talking about^^
nero gamer and whale55 however, do not.

Try to smoothen the shading, and redo the eyes and lips.

skink Wrote:you clearly not getting the right C&C

it sucks

needs more contrast, a better lineart
his face doesn't look like kirby

It sucks is a big word

Phantom Kirby Wrote:

skink Wrote:you clearly not getting the right C&C

it sucks

needs more contrast, a better lineart
his face doesn't look like kirby

^^he knows what he's talking about^^
nero gamer and whale55 however, do not.

so you are saying just because we are saying nice things doesn't mean it isn't helping? That is a little bit......not right. if you want to say I know nothing about spriting, then go ahead. But does it need a whole lot of extra work? Not really. Maybe a little fixing up on the face and hands, but don't make him completely change the sprite.

Phantom Kirby Wrote:

skink Wrote:you clearly not getting the right C&C

it sucks

needs more contrast, a better lineart
his face doesn't look like kirby

^^he knows what he's talking about^^
nero gamer and whale55 however, do not.

All I did was to give an idea and my opinion. I didn't give any advice for them to improve it, so you can't say I don't know what I'm talking about.

Nero_Gamer Wrote:

Phantom Kirby Wrote:

skink Wrote:you clearly not getting the right C&C

it sucks

needs more contrast, a better lineart
his face doesn't look like kirby

^^he knows what he's talking about^^
nero gamer and whale55 however, do not.

All I did was to give an idea and my opinion. I didn't give any advice for them to improve it, so you can't say I don't know what I'm talking about.

Guys, get back on topic!

manaphy is right, lets just give some comments and constructive criticzm and nothing else.

The main thing the face is missing is the cheecks kirby always has cheecks that are dark pink ovals. Try to do that. Here is a picture.


And the mouth should look a bit more like this mouth :D
I hope that helps ;)