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The Fullmetal Alchemist, Edward Elric. I tried to make it similiar to Pokemon style. Anyway, can you see anything that can be improved/altered?

literally everything can be improved
i'll make an edit give me a sec

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also never sprite on a white background
white messes with your ability to see contrast as well

okay thanks.

oh welp i just noticed you said LIKE pokemon style



well
there's that anyways

the main problems with this are that he seems to be facing completely towards the screen as opposed to facing down(how he should look), the colors are extremely dull, and lolanatomy

crap your right. well ill change the colors, however i didnt mean that i wanted it to be completely pokemon style.

yeah i mentioned that right at the start of the post
didn't notice it until i finished the sprite, hurrr

okay edit- colors changed

is that better

He still really shouldn't be facing the screen completely, regardless of the style you're going for. It looks much better all-around if it is looking down a bit.

okay thanks ill change that

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okay- i tried that... and it turned out suckish. could you please do an edit of what its supposed to be?

Quote:Posted today 06:55 PM

Quote:This post was last modified: Today 06:59 PM by Plasmi

You have to give it more than four minutes of effort, dude. =P

I redid it in another style... is this any good or does he need to look down more? And what else could be changed?
Edit- i realized that the face was way too big... i changed it
Edit- i noticed that some of the black parts of the hair were standing out- fixed

the face's readbility is really low. avoid using black outlines on small details.