Even if you don't include the feet, the legs need to be changed so that they don't look like stumps.
Look at at the reference image there; the legs are somewhat chubby, but they still look like legs.
Yours look more like triangles glued to their bodies.
edit- Also, something needs to be done to fix the nose on the red pikmin, but I'm not sure how to help there. Maybe someone else can figure it out.
The triangle legs are fine for sprites of this size. You can't really include details like that in sprites like this.
The problem is the shitty palette, bad animations, sloppy shading, and they're all leaning forward?????
I've been trying to help him out with the palettes for a while.
Think you could give it a shot?
(And a better nose while you're at it, haha)
Here's my shitty try at an edit:
![[Image: 119rsix.jpg]](http://i39.tinypic.com/119rsix.jpg)
well, pikmin lean forward in the game, look at a close up veiw camera and you'll see there buts stick out
try making yellow's ears more like the ref. They don't stick out and/or aren't big enough IMO
![[Image: PikminSprites1-16.png]](http://i556.photobucket.com/albums/ss10/Yang12345_2009/PikminSprites1-16.png)
Nose fixed, Ears fixed, F. Shrugbug added, M. Shrugbug added, Serwig added, Bulbmin added, Dwarf Bulbear added, DwaRF orange bulborb added, Dwarf white bulborb added, Red Bulborb added, Spotty Bulbear added, Bulbmin mature added, Smoky progg pearl added, berries added
I also have pikmin with super mario bros three poses, should I post them? There not a part of the project, I just made thewm for fun
Just start over
You've improved, I'll give you that but you need to start from the ground up using what you've learned.
i'm going to take a break for a while and work on somthing else. BUT DON'T WORRY! I'll be working on this while I work on some other stuff.
I love the idea, look good :p. Pikmins look pretty good, but I would apply more shades to Bulbmin, I'm sure they will look better :p.
(04-30-2010, 07:27 PM)Pikmin Awsomeness Wrote: [ -> ]i'm going to take a break for a while and work on somthing else. BUT DON'T WORRY! I'll be working on this while I work on some other stuff.
Gosh, where have I heard this one before.