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Hmm I think I need to widen the purple one's legs, and shorten said legs :/

they're all disturbingly fat; and White and Purple pikmin need to have have much more noticeable propotion changes than the others.

I was trying to go for a chubby look for all of them, I can agree the purple pikmin needs to be a bit bigger, but wasnt the white one the same size as the other 3?

dont use white as a base color.

the red's nose looks more like a deformed smile, and they're uncomfortably stiff. Plus, nobody's head normally is at a 3/4 while their body faces forward

Fattened purple a good few pixels, made white thinner a good few pixels, used a light grey as a base...

mean, dont use white as the color of the canvas. use whatever desaturated color you want.

amd somehow fix the shape of those pikmins so they wouldn't look like a mix between teletubbies and power rangers :/

white pikmin is also shorter than the others
he needs to be about 3/4ths as tall

you didn't fix the nose on the red one >:U

I see where the joke lies

that aside, I can understand going for a chubby sort of look. I think these need a lot more work. In all honesty, it just looks like you did a two minute rush job without using an reference. The eyes of each pikmin could be less blocky and they could differ more from each other. Also want to point out the stems on their heads are usually colored, and a bit thicker.

I havent done anyhthing to the eyes sans the red pikmin, and sorry baegal I looked over your crit on the nose thing earlier. Haha sorry bout that

The white one's palette is too bright, try to make the outline and the second shade darker. Also, the eyes are stiil too blocky, and red ones make him look like he is looking at the floor.

put the irises in the middle of the eyes, not the corners

(04-13-2010, 11:27 AM)Vipershark Wrote: [ -> ]put the irises in the middle of the eyes, not the corners

why should him do that.

so they wont be looking down????????????????????????????????????????????