(05-30-2010, 03:27 PM)Neslug Wrote: [ -> ]The legs also look stiff (try bending them a little) and like those are its feet, not shoes (the MLiT sprite isn't a really great example for that though).
Meh...could be better.
Any suggestions on how the legs will bend is welcome.
(05-31-2010, 12:31 PM)Slissith Wrote: [ -> ]Any suggestions on how the legs will bend is welcome.
yyyyyour own reference?
Hmm...
Certainly better than before, what do you guys think?
Actually, that does look better. You've come quite far.
Now the head looks a little small compared to the rest of the body. But like Groove put it, it's getting better.
Sorry for the long inactivity time guys, I was, well, bored...
Whiped up a new head that is closer to the official image.
Also, thaks a lot, Groove and Nes!
Bad lineart and terrrible shading. Now he looks like an alligator, and the shading on the lower jaw makes no sense.
Well, he really does look like a gator...
I think it's slightly better now.
He should look like a bony turtle, yours looks like an alligator. The shading should not only under the teeth, add a bit at the bottom.
The teeth are much to pronounced.
Go back to the old turtle-y head.
Also make carapace more rounded. The plastron looks ok for now, but you may want to fix the gap in the ribs on the stomach area of it.