Awesome idea, this
3 You're going to color in black and white, correct?
I think I aa'd correctly, this is the first time I aa'd at all.
I also just noticed the perspective issues hmmm :/
correct perspective isn't that important here because you have a limited number of colors and it'll be hard to represent the body parts when they overlap themselves. Instead, make a pose that can be read without any problem.
Just trying to give it that look:
notice the pose, a lot of old cartoon characters would raise their fists like that (actually with both hands but overlapping is a pain and i'm too tired)
Stupid hat :/
CC?
Sorry for the delay Ive been at band camp and just got back the other day.
Sengir I cant see what that picture you posted, its giving me a 403
It's giving me that too now, but don't worry I re-uploaded it:
Oh you updated before I could post my idea for it. You basically did it. I just don't feel the head is very mario-ish. Body is too Luigi like aswell. Fatten him up. Make the head more mario like?
EDIT: here's my version of it. Don't know if it helps(not showing off my shitty work, just trying to help really!)
make him more round and plump, he's too slim.
Okay, I'll get back started on him whn I get off from church camp Saturday