Help me.

I know all that stuff. Did I do it right?
Well, no. Look at your own hair. Because it's not made of a single lump of substance, its highlight against the sun is scattered; and doesn't show up as a single pale blob.
And before you bring up Inazuma Eleven or something; the way they do the hair in that show is fucking stupid.
I have no idea what that show is. I will fix the hair.
I think you know, but don't know how to apply them.
first of all, never use pure white as BG. Use a neutral color (like gray, for example) so you can notice color problems easily.
you have too much colors for a sprite that small, it won't hurt if you cut out some of them. Use a darker outline for the nose and mouth because they're almost invisible.
I did an edit (I cut all the unnecessary colors, fixed some of the jagged lines) because an image tells more than a thousand words.
![[Image: dffgz.png]](http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/5443/dffgz.png)
How's this?
![[Image: w6wadk.png]](http://i26.tinypic.com/w6wadk.png)
better than the original, id move the jaw a few pixels back just to give the head more mass, and work on the rest of the sprite.
![[Image: 2vi1cac.png]](http://i27.tinypic.com/2vi1cac.png)
Moved jaw.
the hair is a mess right now. Try smoothening the lines.
![[Image: 5z2lpe.png]](http://i28.tinypic.com/5z2lpe.png)
Fix'd.
a tip when making hair is to think on them like being chunks of hair, not a rigid helmet. They're hella easier when grouped in small pieces instead of grouping all the hair in one shape.
(07-09-2010, 08:50 PM)Gors Wrote: [ -> ]a tip when making hair is to think on them like being chunks of hair, not a rigid helmet. They're hella easier when grouped in small pieces instead of grouping all the hair in one shape.
Thanks. But was that a general tip, or does my sprites hair still need to be fixed?