yeah I
mentioned earlier I would fix the shoulders
![[Image: face2g.png]](http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/9955/face2g.png)
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okay im done working on this for tonight i've done literally nothing all day
idk, that hair looks like a lot of blue ice cream instead of hair
tone down the smoothness a lil'.
there's something that really annoys me: you're putting a lot of shades in the hair, and the shades alternate between saturated and desaturated...
it doesn't look good. what i suggest is you get very saturated colours for highlights, and desaturate progressively to the darkest shade:
![[Image: 1uped6.png]](http://a.imageshack.us/img843/4708/1uped6.png)
injected a bit of purple to make it more interesting, the result is similar, i know.
redoing the face completely
i'll probably redo the eyes too but idk yet, they might just need to be moved a bit
![[Image: face2va.png]](http://img294.imageshack.us/img294/1301/face2va.png)
hey you just took the edit i did on your dude's hair >:c
oh and good luck on the face!
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![[Image: face2v.png]](http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/839/face2v.png)
Face Is Almost Exactly The Same
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The texture for the headband feels a bit off. Is it meant to be camo print?
change that nose please, it looks like he had some cheap plastic surgery... it's flat and straight (( i know nobody with a nose like that, mj is my nearest guess)) so i'd suggest you look for some refs (not necessarily somebody with a big honker, natch)
and i'd up the lightness on the headband too
the ear's looking good, keep following helm's advice

i /think/ i fixed the nose????
it could probably stand to be """curved""" a bit more, but maybe not
idk
dude
his nostrils
you've made them flat wtf
the highlight doesn't look right and nor does its shape
here's what i mean:
![[Image: 1uped6.png]](http://a.imageshack.us/img827/4708/1uped6.png)
no stealie รน_u