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Newest idea involves mario kart (inspired by diddy kong racing's ice levels) so everyone else can lay off

I've sketched like 8 ideas so far yaaaa indecisiveness

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shawn made me put effort into stuff other than the statue

also make the seafoam more like foam

Little progress done. I just touched things up and im gonna start shading tomorrow.

WELP

didn't realize how much of a distinguished gentleman I sounded like in that post

oh well
the bitching actually helped me be a little more productive SO


still a wip, but that's about the size of the overall piece~

earliest wip i can offer atm. at least i already got an idea of what i'm planing to do.

I might try and fix up some things, but I'm more or less Finished:

(09-06-2010, 10:20 PM)JoshR691 Wrote: [ -> ]I might try and fix up some things, but I'm more or less Finished:

That is so kick ass, but I wanna help you get even more kick ass.
I can't tell much, but you should make the clouds a bit more longer in width, try to browse pictures of drawn clouds, you'll see what i mean. So, kinda give them a little "trail" .
Maybe try to get rid of the last sky shade, since it's a bit too dark for a day sky, and if you try looking up the sky , the sky is always uni-coloured, except near the surface. Lastly, try to add a, white, 1 pixel thin, line to give the spaceships a bit more shine. example: Mouse ship from Kirby and Masked Dedede
Have you already tried to use some anti aliasing on the spaceship's shines? If you're keeping it colour limited, then don't worry about what I said

keep going Joshr, your entry was really the clean quality from your customs i expected of you and you're doing even better : D

Damn, how the hell do you guys pick your colors ? Especially fish in space.

(09-06-2010, 05:42 PM)Skink Wrote: [ -> ]

Little progress done. I just touched things up and im gonna start shading tomorrow.

>My face when realising there's a red Pikmin in your WIP.

don't worry, what i circled here is just nitpicking. Besides that, your entry is really wonderfull man. *thumbs up*

Fra, you missed the rocks in the foreground

Really good so far though.

yeah, i was definitely a bit lazy on a few parts (the green one was supposed to be some of the moss blowing off btw). i might fix it but idk, its over soon anyway.

Pfff, I'm still inmidst of work and have a lot to do before I can call mine finished