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Ok, aside from my other WIP's I've got this Paper Mario styled Flurry, enjoy
I don't know what is up with me and flurry but this little guy packs the punch!

Looks like there isnt enough aa and too much shading
The colors are too dark, even for paper mario style, use junior troopa's white palette.
The walking poses look kinda bad. Try replicating mario's or another enemies.
I think you should rework the idle, try basing it off of another enemies idle.

(08-04-2008, 09:46 PM)Cshad Wrote: [ -> ]Looks like there isnt enough aa and too much shading
The colors are too dark, even for paper mario style, use junior troopa's white palette.
The walking poses look kinda bad. Try replicating mario's or another enemies.
I think you should rework the idle, try basing it off of another enemies idle.

Fixed the AA and the palette, but the idle is kind of like a goomba, and Flurry skates around when he is walking so I will leave that.

Not bad, but PM enemies usually have 2 hurt frames.

(08-04-2008, 10:11 PM)A.J. Nitro Wrote: [ -> ]Not bad, but PM enemies usually have 2 hurt frames.

Well I think he is an exception because he has no arms.

Ya, but it kick its feet.

(08-04-2008, 10:16 PM)A.J. Nitro Wrote: [ -> ]Ya, but it kick its feet.

Ok sheet update, I made Flurry kick his feet outward.

Very nice job. The only thing that looks weird is sthe shading, it should be like paper, not round.

I think the hurt poses should look more like the Goomba's.

(08-05-2008, 12:13 PM)A.J. Nitro Wrote: [ -> ]I think the hurt poses should look more like the Goomba's.

Well I tried to make the feet go up and down, but it didn't fit with Flurry because he has a wider body, so It looked better if the feet went in and out.

Okay people Here is the Sumo Bro done and ready for submission, enjoy!

The overworld walking pose is weird. Otherwise is good.

It's good!

"And Mario was attacked by a Fire Sumo!"

(08-17-2008, 09:13 PM)A.J. Nitro Wrote: [ -> ]It's good!

"And Mario was attacked by a Fire Sumo!"

And a Magnum Bill! LOL, next im working on Aquatic Enemies from SMB3 in M&L, right now Jelectro is a WIP, you can see it in my SIG.

I've always had a strange liking towards both Jelectro and Flurry, both of which you've now sprited.

Marry me.