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A.J. Nitro Wrote:Not bad, but a few things:
-The shadow shouldn't stretch. Normally they stay the same in one spot.
-Also, maybe make the arms sway to the left and the right.
That's exactly what I was worrying about, and about the arms, he only moves them to the left for some weird reason, I guess that's how Sumo Bro's walk.
In his walk,
it looks more like he's sliding than running and his right hand (our left) looks really weird
Ok I made it so his arms move back and fourth, Sorry if the shadow stretches I will fix that later, and about the aniamtion being fast I will fix that too,
Idle
![[Image: sumobro1fu4.gif]](http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/4017/sumobro1fu4.gif)
Walking
![[Image: sumobro2ty0.gif]](http://img148.imageshack.us/img148/8770/sumobro2ty0.gif)
Now he looks like he's dancing. . . . . O_o"
Parakoopa Wrote:Now he looks like he's dancing. . . . . O_o"
The animation is too fast, but he is walking, but the shadow is off. And I DON'T know WTF happened with the feet?
I think they look better the other way around... The Walk animation looks better as an Idle, and the Idle looks better as a Walk.
Ok I fixed the speed of the animation, and I made the walking better
![[Image: wip3po7.png]](http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/710/wip3po7.png)
Idle
![[Image: sumobro1ac3.gif]](http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/926/sumobro1ac3.gif)
Walking
![[Image: sumobro2lw8.gif]](http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/849/sumobro2lw8.gif)
With the walking, his legs could use some work.
The arms are great, however.
pikspiksmaroator Wrote:With the walking, his legs could use some work.
The arms are great, however.
I think it is good with the extension, and when I tried shortening it, he looked like he was limping instead of walking, so next is the fighting, Sumo Bro's stomp on blocks sending a lightning Bolt to the ground that spits up Fire! Or they can cause a semi-earthquake, or fissure.
Or both. Yeah, that'll be good!
Ok I decided as I'm finishing my Sumo Bro, I would do Ghost Piranha from YIDS in M&L style, so C+C please
![[Image: ghostpirahnaty2.png]](http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/6513/ghostpirahnaty2.png)
You quit on Sumo Bro?
anyways, Make the tail a little smaller and the mouth and wings a little bigger on ghost Piranha. Other than that, I see no probalem with it.
(08-04-2008, 02:36 PM)Shroob2 Wrote: [ -> ]You quit on Sumo Bro?
anyways, Make the tail a little smaller and the mouth and wings a little bigger on ghost Piranha. Other than that, I see no probalem with it.
Of course I'm not quitting on Sumo Bro! He is a WIP, I decided to start on the Ghost Piranha, and I'm not making the tail smaller because it has to be able to move back and fourth, but yes I did make the lips bigger, and I did some extra touches on the shading to make it better,
![[Image: ghostpirahnapm4.png]](http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/5706/ghostpirahnapm4.png)
I love that Gost Piranha.
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