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Simirror looks good, and the boogie man looks like he's off to a good start

This is becoming a pain in the ass to shade :V

EDIT:

His right leg looks too bent.
Interesting character.

Ill fix the leg in a moment


Update

Are those gray things buttons, rivets, or his ribcage poking out?

Whatever you want them to be
I honestly wanted them to be sort of like buttons, but ribs work too.

They looked like buttons to me, probably too bright.

Someone at pixelation gave me enough C+C to suggest for me to redo it, so I am. But first, a pose needs to be decided on. Something more menacing.



Would this work? Also, any suggestions for the arms?

The sound of rolling dice to make music in the air~
Cause I'm a gamblin boogie man, although I dont play fair~



I have an update. I dont want to do too much with it until i get any feedback on the newest pose.

I personally like it, especially the shadowy hand.

I have more of a final draft now before I add a background and start shading.
Any suggestions before I continue?
For a background, should I just have darkness emanating from him?

The lineart on the swirly black hands and such could be much cleaner. I also wasn't too fond of the shading style of the last one, so maybe something a bit more complex and realistic on this one? Good luck =P

Edit: Oh and I like the new face more

Is this one a little better ?



Trying out background colors, trying to get the main shading down to
C+C?

I love the concept. and it looks good so far :>