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Well, um does it look okay? I'm planning to use this with sheet tags instead of a recolor of mario , and possibly a replacement avatar (animated of course ;D). So cc please.

how do we know if it looks like you.

Looks like a lazy edit to me; but anyways:
Hat is too small for the head, angle of face doesn't match that of the hat, just noticed ugly linework/shading on the neck.
the neck isn't properly connected to the head (it's too far forward)
the shoulders are very anatomically awkward (and his left/our right arm sticks up out of the "shoulder" awkwardly as well)
the torso is rather lazily added in and poorly shaded (if at all)
the leg appears to be bent in a strange way
his right hand is very flat and lazily pixeled in.

The overall angle of each of the elements in the sprite is inconsistent and the anatomy of the character is awkward and rather poorly shaded; try spending more time working on sprites instead of making lazy edits. I'd suggest sketching the character before spriting 'im.

(01-17-2011, 08:04 PM)Fuchikoma Wrote: [ -> ]how do we know if it looks like you.

Lol you don't.

(01-18-2011, 01:16 AM)Sketchasaurus Wrote: [ -> ]Looks like a lazy edit to me; but anyways:
Hat is too small for the head, angle of face doesn't match that of the hat, just noticed ugly linework/shading on the neck.
the neck isn't properly connected to the head (it's too far forward)
the shoulders are very anatomically awkward (and his left/our right arm sticks up out of the "shoulder" awkwardly as well)
the torso is rather lazily added in and poorly shaded (if at all)
the leg appears to be bent in a strange way
his right hand is very flat and lazily pixeled in.

The overall angle of each of the elements in the sprite is inconsistent and the anatomy of the character is awkward and rather poorly shaded; try spending more time working on sprites instead of making lazy edits. I'd suggest sketching the character before spriting 'im.

Alright. I'll sketch him tonight (if I have time). Thanks for the feedback and taking your time to give some. Seeing all of the problems I'll just sketch him a new pose.

also the shirt sucks. Those green details don't match the style.

(01-18-2011, 08:37 AM)Gors٫ Gors٫ Gors٫ Gors Wrote: [ -> ]also the shirt sucks. Those green details don't match the style.

Wait green?

oh wow being sleepy is unhealthy to the eyes


I meant the blue lines on his shirt. They're too sharp and messy overall.