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I find PM a fun style, and im having success with it recently, so I decided to do this PM style Eerie, C+C Please,

Not bad. I don't think the edge of the mouth should touch the arm.

the body should be a little less... fat... and the nose/snout/mouth thing should be a little bigger. It looks like they're one and the same.

(08-10-2008, 07:02 PM)CoolYoshi Wrote: [ -> ]I find PM a fun style, and im having success with it recently, so I decided to do this PM style Flurry, C+C Please,

Pretty good
but the nose need to be rounder and the eyes bigger+what the others said

(08-10-2008, 07:05 PM)gangster guy Wrote: [ -> ]Not bad. I don't think the edge of the mouth should touch the arm.

Thanks, but actually yes, because if you look at the SMW Eerie, it touches http://www.mariowiki.com/Eerie

EDIT: Fixed, I made the body a little smaller, rounded out the nose, but the eyes are the right size,

(08-10-2008, 07:18 PM)CoolYoshi Wrote: [ -> ]

(08-10-2008, 07:05 PM)gangster guy Wrote: [ -> ]Not bad. I don't think the edge of the mouth should touch the arm.

Thanks, but actually yes, because if you look at the SMW Eerie, it touches http://www.mariowiki.com/Eerie

EDIT: Fixed, I made the body a ittle smaller, rounded out the nose, but the eyes are the right size,

You should not use SMW sprites as reference :X

(08-10-2008, 07:26 PM)Solink Wrote: [ -> ]

(08-10-2008, 07:18 PM)CoolYoshi Wrote: [ -> ]

(08-10-2008, 07:05 PM)gangster guy Wrote: [ -> ]Not bad. I don't think the edge of the mouth should touch the arm.

Thanks, but actually yes, because if you look at the SMW Eerie, it touches http://www.mariowiki.com/Eerie

EDIT: Fixed, I made the body a ittle smaller, rounded out the nose, but the eyes are the right size,

You should not use SMW sprites as reference :X

Well it has to look like it is supposed to, that is the only REF I have, and I fixed more,

It should look like It's sticking it's arms out, like a zombie.

(08-10-2008, 07:50 PM)gangster guy Wrote: [ -> ]It should look like It's sticking it's arms out, like a zombie.

Well they are as far as they need to be, what are Eeries anyway, they looked like Dead Fish O__o, well here as an update,

i think the tail should be a bit bigger

(08-10-2008, 08:24 PM)2ndLtHavoc Wrote: [ -> ]i think the tail should be a bit bigger

Update: made the tail bigger,

(08-10-2008, 07:26 PM)Solink Wrote: [ -> ]You should not use SMW sprites as reference :X

I'm pretty sure that's the only game it was in, so that would be the only reference.

The back arm is too long.

(08-10-2008, 08:34 PM)Elyk Wrote: [ -> ]

(08-10-2008, 07:26 PM)Solink Wrote: [ -> ]You should not use SMW sprites as reference :X

I'm pretty sure that's the only game it was in, so that would be the only reference.

The back arm is too long.

Made it smaller,

It fits the style pretty well. However, his head seems to be facing a different direction from his body. Maybe make his underbelly more round?

BTW, I think Eerie is supposed to be a dinosaur ghost; it is on Dinosaur Island, after all...

Put less shading on the blue part