I like the 4th the most but there shouldn't be any black lines except the outline or the Eyes. Also I have A WIP or a Pirahna Plant.
Oh whoops, forgot about his mouth, I'll fix it later
@Green Fire Kirby, That's very good. Round the corner of the lip and add some AA, and then it'll be awsome.
@Rakia, Are you joining?
@KillerAslox, the fourth one is best by far, but make the eyebrows on the inside of the sprite a dark grey.
Also, I worked on the koopa a heck of a lot.To think I was happy with the first one. I Also have the castle tiles.[
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Note: FYI, the koopa was moddeled to look like a KA version of the ml:ss koopa. It was not edited in any way.
Good job on the Koopa. I fixed up the Pirahna Plant's mouth and added shading.
Looking good. The edge of the lip still needs to be more rounded.
Green Fire Kirby Wrote:Good job on the Koopa. I fixed up the Pirahna Plant's mouth and added shading.
The line for the mouth is to dark. Just fix that and it'll look great.
idk if I'm joining just felt like helping out a bit.
(08-14-2008, 08:08 AM)Green Fire Kirby Wrote: [ -> ]I like the 4th the most but there shouldn't be any black lines except the outline or the Eyes. Also I have A WIP or a Pirahna Plant.
WAYYYYYYYYYY to many colors, fix up the lineart, reduce the colors, then it will be up to par.
I did Yoshi. C+C.
he seem's abit tall. try to make him a little bit shorter.
other than that. it look's Good.
I thought so to.
I think I have to fix his neck area now.
I personally prefer the taller one, as Yoshi is usually huge.
whatever float's your boat.
i don't know what else i can think of that you can fix other than his nose. the outline on the inside is abit thick.
EDIT: i tried wiggler (right now just the head.)
C+C is appreciated
Good. Make the head smaller, but not the flower.
like this?