Remade Onix:
Hmm I dunno. The head just doesn't look like Onix anymore. I preferred the older one.
(02-13-2009, 04:48 PM)A.J. Nitro Wrote: [ -> ]Hmm I dunno. The head just doesn't look like Onix anymore. I preferred the older one.
Well, I remade him because people were saying that it 'looks like I stole the official sprite', so I completely remade him...Unfortunately, the head Suffered...So, if you have any suggestions to make the head look better, by all means, tell me...But I think the 'Snout' could be a little longer...
It's because of his jowls. Because they turn downwards and are so large, it looks like he's upset/suffereing from cerebal palsy. Make the smaller, or put the slope between it and the main mouthline at a gentler gradient.
Ok, so...Which one looks best?:
1. I 'Can't' use, because it 'looks too much like D/P's sprite'
2. Is the one that's up now
3. Is the one I tried to make look more like Onix
...I think, out of the two I 'can' use, three looks better...
If you could use the third one, but maybe change the eyes on it (and maybe bottom jaw a tad longer), it would look a lot better. They are all really good, it's just the last one's eyes are kind of odd.
Fixed Onix again:
Shrink the eyes a bit, it makes his face look a bit off.
Eyes are still too big? I'll try to fix that again...Too Big as in width, Length, or both?
Sunkern's done:
I guess Onix is better now. Same with Sunkern.
(02-14-2009, 08:49 PM)A.J. Nitro Wrote: [ -> ]I guess Onix is better now. Same with Sunkern.
Well, just adjusted him again to be safe:
Which now looks even better!
would you redo lucario's run it looks odd when animated
I'll eventually remake Lucario
Shaymin's done: