07-27-2011, 03:00 PM
Here is some old sprites I made a while back, so I decided to post them. Crit would be appreciated!
![[Image: supermariosunshinerando.png]](http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/1326/supermariosunshinerando.png)
07-27-2011, 03:22 PM
Everything seems very flat for now, because the impression of volume is badly conveyed.
I think your palette could be better, too.
Here's a little tutorial, which also gives a good impression of a sphere:
![[Image: rampsak6.png]](http://img249.imageshack.us/img249/1618/rampsak6.png)
And remember: using a reference and showing us a reference can help you improve, and help us tell you how to improve!
I think your palette could be better, too.
Here's a little tutorial, which also gives a good impression of a sphere:
And remember: using a reference and showing us a reference can help you improve, and help us tell you how to improve!
07-27-2011, 03:42 PM
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/1326/supe...erando.png
I gave the melon and the kick-fruit some more shading. And I gave the pepper shape. That better?
Now that I look at it, the kick-fruit looks very dark.
I gave the melon and the kick-fruit some more shading. And I gave the pepper shape. That better?
(07-27-2011, 03:42 PM)SHADEDBZ Wrote: [ -> ]http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/1326/supe...erando.png
I gave the melon and the kick-fruit some more shading. And I gave the pepper shape. That better?
Now that I look at it, the kick-fruit looks very dark.