The VG Resource

Thank you for your lengthy criticism, I've tried to iron all the kinks you've pointed out.

I admit to struggling with the arms, so please give me your input on that.
I rearranged the arms, made her torso thinner and more curved, moved her legs around to make her seem more balanced, made her right foot flatter and reangled her left foot. I also made her head less distracting and removed the green-haired girl for Metaru's peace of mind.

Try drawing a stick man first, to get a general idea of pose and balance, then build muscle structure on top of that, then clothing and details on top of that.