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After a little break, some pose tweaking! It looks more dynamic now

Her hips seem to be placed quite high, which gives the impression she has a pretty short torso. This impression is accentuated by the relative straightness of her right side and the distance between her navel and her underwear. I don't know if you were aiming for a pose in which she leans forward (consequently "squashing" form), but if it's the case, my edit on the bottom right (previous page) could help you.

the best would to make the navel not a 'dot', but a 'line' like chris' edit. When we bend up, the skin makes indents, so if you want her to lean, you might want to check that.

I am not exactly the best at criticising realistic anatomy as chris' but these are my two cents c: