The VG Resource

It's supposed to be the Green Hill totem poles. I know it's not supposed to be EXACTLY alike, but still.

take a look at the wings on this sheet: http://www.spriters-resource.com/genesis...llzone.png

My point about the faces needing to be cleaner still stands, though.

Virt means that the mouths are blocky and stuff, and I agree.

Better?

still a bit blocky, but it's okay. Also, try getting rid of the lines on the wings and see if that makes 'em look any better.

Just noticed that the shading is inconsistent--- there's a bulge in the shadow on the second head from the bottom.

Also, I'm pretty sure the lighting is supposed to be from the top right.

More like this then?

That's Left

Whoops.

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i would suggest slowing it down just a slight bit.

it took me a few loops to realize that the first attack was a frying pan, and then a few more to tell what was in the pan.

Also, you could make the swing go farther down instead of stopping abruptly, to make it more realistic

Tweaked speed and a few other things.
Should I take out the eggs and bacon? I only added them because it didn't really look like a frying pan at first glance

EDIT: ninja'd. I'll work on the swing now

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A
B (< one with less charge time for each attack)
Which one is better?

very nice! while the eggs and bacon aren't perfectly readable, i think that's mostly due to the movement of the pan. it's probably fine as-is.

EDIT: definitely A.

Bacon? I thought it was Sausage.
Tiny breakfast sausages.... yumm

oh, the sprite looks good too.
Maybe some motion blur, It doesn't seem very forceful at the moment.
I'm going to make some tiny breakfast sausages..

I actually read it as bacon and eggs right away.


... namely because I absolutely hate eggs and can usually spot them from a mile away. xD