whooops, i meant second. my bad
This here I'm not sure of. The water fountains seem off.
Daisy's mouth seems a bit awkward. Not sure how to fix it, though. As for the fountains, I'm not too sure how to "fix" them. Maybe watch some videos of fountains on youtube or something for reference.
the fountains look like they're puking out water, one gallon at a time, make them look like the flow of water is constant
also i don't like the fact that they're fit in boxes, try to make the water have a more natural shape
I'll get to work on the fountains, but, for now, here's a sheet of Hindel from Odin Sphere in a more 8-bit look.
I know there are some jaggies here and there.
Just wanted to say, your work is absolutely stunning. It's sad that commercial games (apart from commercial indies) that use pixel art are so few and far between these days. It's pieces like these that really make me want to see a resurgence in pixelated retail titles.
Thanks for the kind words. I really appreciate that.
Hopefully, I've nailed the fountains down correctly this time (and fixed Daisy's mouth).
Some people may recognize this from the old KSSU style project Dr. Schnaps held. I didn't ever finish it.