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I think the shirt and scarf should move slightly, it currently looks painted on to the torso.

It still looks like he's dancing tbh. I think he should be swinging his arms less, and maybe not be turning quite as much.
Otherwise, that's a really smooth animation, I love looking at it. @o@

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the main problem is that this doesn't look battle ready at all. I for one wouldn't sway the head and torso all the time while confronting an enemy. do something more 'comfortable'; an idle animation must combine with every other animation, since it all stems from there.

well, um, ahh, ighj, amm, It can only get better!

I want to start making sheets. I also want to submit this to the site.

Because I have done neither of those things.

EDIT: C+C would be great

WIP BABY.

(This is actually a walk, but I think I made it too fast.) e.e

((also, I think the eyes just looking like they are just moving around the face.)) e.e

I don't think double posting is allowed. I'd have to check the forum rules. I could be wrong.

The Kirby, the outlines are jagged. and his shading doesn't give me that round feeling y'know? This is a thing of preference, but his mouth should be removed or replaced with a open mouth. Like this: ( ' o ' ) or ( ' . ' )

I also think the running animation looks fine. I believe you will add arms on later?

(01-30-2013, 09:21 PM)Novally Wrote: [ -> ]I don't think double posting is allowed. I'd have to check the forum rules. I could be wrong.

It's okay unless you update the post with content.

(01-30-2013, 09:21 PM)Novally Wrote: [ -> ]The Kirby, the outlines are jagged. and his shading doesn't give me that round feeling y'know? This is a thing of preference, but his mouth should be removed or replaced with a open mouth. Like this: ( ' o ' ) or ( ' . ' )

The outlines seem fine to me, I guess. Round feeling? I'm quite not sure what you mean by there but I shall try editing the sprite a bit. I don't really like his mouth being like this: ( ' . ' ) . I find it really expression-less.

(01-30-2013, 09:21 PM)Novally Wrote: [ -> ]I also think the running animation looks fine. I believe you will add arms on later?

Actually, It's a walking animation. I just made it too fast >_>

Yes! I will add arms! That's why I wrote "WIP". Standing for Work In Progress.

The outline does seem fine to you, but a second opinion makes wonders. It's jagged. (look at the line where his arm begins too).


The arm thing about the animation was rhetorical by the way lol!

By round feeling I meant shading. He feels a bit flat.


I'm looking at the sprite again his right shoe doesn't match his left. I know it's a thing of depth perception but the right show looks shorter.

Sources:
http://www.natomic.com/hosted/marks/mpat/shading.html
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2twx-rqhA5U
http://www.spriters-resource.com/communi...?tid=13868

the outlines aren't jagged actually -- that's really smooth for a circle. you're supposed to be able to see the pixels in pixel art after all. anything beyond that can be fixed with inner anti-aliasing.
I would give him a small smile and bigger eyes.

They are jagged lol. It's true. Anti-aliasing would fix it. A smaller smile and bigger eyes would be attractive.

(01-30-2013, 11:34 PM)Novally Wrote: [ -> ]They are jagged lol.

Actually they're fine considering the arm is jutting out of the round body.



Koybi's left arm is a pixel short towards the bottom, the other arm doesn't show the lightsource correctly, the contrast is a tiny bit low and things.

Well I guess my comment was all a matter of an opinion. I'd do his outline differently. I apologize. My comment on the shading and feet still stands.

Nice edits, Previous. You did there anti-aliasing on the mouth and a small fix on the shading. It looks great. Does his feet have to be cut shorter though lol? The right foot looked fine for it's length, just the other shoe needed to be a bit longer.

Okay, I edited it. The left (his right) leg looks weird to me, but I'll fix it later.

(01-30-2013, 09:05 PM)recolornerd Wrote: [ -> ]

WIP BABY.

(This is actually a walk, but I think I made it too fast.) e.e

((also, I think the eyes just looking like they are just moving around the face.)) e.e

Yeah, this looks more like a run than a walk