I don't think Mario's hat is meant to pop out like that.
Your edit isn't that great.
When he's in this suit, he doesn't have a hat, the top is supposed to be round. Yours clearly shows his hat coming out.
Oh, you mean make it shorter and rounder?
I think he wants to say that the hat is too wide near the forehead.
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It has to be thinner.
There's mot much to say yet, you should make his head rounder.
And what's the white thing under Mario's head? Is it his belly or his hand?
It's the tanooki suit's belly and his hand.
It's the tanooki belly and his hand...
Doesn't really look like it's from SMW...
UPDATE:fixed suit
the eyes on the statue looks too far apart and the hat is still weird
I'm trying to make it shorter.(grunt), but i'll fix the eyes.any shading problems?
Are there any shading problems?
I used the SMB3 sprite for reference.it's actually pretty helpful.
UPDATE:Improved
does any shading need work?
I would look t the SMW world sprites closer... closer still... clooooooooser.
I read the tutorial, you know.but all I want to know is if I shaded wrong.