The VG Resource

It's coming along. May I edit this as well?

Her proportions are still odd... She got such short arms
But I like the shading.

Small boobs ):
The legs look strange.
And for a moment there, I though she had a penis.

(09-21-2008, 10:30 PM)Lucho Wrote: [ -> ]Small boobs ):
The legs look strange.
And for a moment there, I though she had a penis.

Her breasts aren't small, they are pretty big from the looks of that, and she is wearing very tight clothes, and they go with her body shape, and I know the arms are a bit short and off, I rushed it last night because I have school. This is a morning post and later today I will work at her to get her and fix these things up.

Here's a little something I use as a reference for hands - Hold your hand up to your face. Notice how your hand is the same size as your head?

Dazz is right. In anatomy for drawing we learn that most of your body have some kind of proportion with your head.
Also another tip: your elbow is usually aligned with your hip.

Okay, as you can see I've updated a few minor things, but from now I will leave her arms behind her, and lets work at whatever else needs to be fixed first, here is the update,

The size of her legs is disproportianate - Bend your knee as far as you can - Does the heel of your foot touch my backside?
Yes, it does.
Hers wouldn't - Her shins would also snap from the weight on them. Make the relatively similar to the calf.

Also remember which angle the legs are facing - And then check the knees.

(09-22-2008, 05:10 PM)Dazz Wrote: [ -> ]The size of her legs is disproportianate - Bend your knee as far as you can - Does the heel of your foot touch my backside?
Yes, it does.
Hers wouldn't - Her shins would also snap from the weight on them. Make the relatively similar to the calf.

Also remember which angle the legs are facing - And then check the knees.

Better? I made the legs bigger and longer, and made the stance strait,

(09-22-2008, 05:29 PM)CoolYoshi Wrote: [ -> ]

(09-22-2008, 05:10 PM)Dazz Wrote: [ -> ]The size of her legs is disproportianate - Bend your knee as far as you can - Does the heel of your foot touch my backside?
Yes, it does.
Hers wouldn't - Her shins would also snap from the weight on them. Make the relatively similar to the calf.

Also remember which angle the legs are facing - And then check the knees.

Better? I made the legs bigger and longer, and made the stance strait,

Do your leg seperate like that?

Ok I added some more highlights, and fixed the shoes, and stance. So here is yet another update,

her boobs are too far apart. XF

(09-22-2008, 06:46 PM)thornmask Wrote: [ -> ]her boobs are too far apart. XF

There ;D, I made her boobs closer together, and also updated the knee, now it looks better, but im sure there is still stuff to improve, keep the Criticism Coming Guys!

Getting better!

I don't know about her legs... her hips are ok, but it starts to get somewhat weird when it's near of her feet...

To be honest, she looks more like some barbie doll to me.
her pose isn't very curly like, you've made her look shy while she isn't.
there are the anatomy nitpicks that others have already mentioned, she should be paler so she actually looks remotely robotic, and the way the hair is shaded looks kind of unnatural.