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EDIT: to prevent confusion, this is not SMB sprite, It's Earthbound related.


Meh, I am not completely satisfied with it, right now I am trying to make a sheet with it.

Anyways, criticism please!

Here goes; It has banded shading, it hasn't got enough contrast, you didn't shade based on the shape... and that's it also the colours are... ok

tomster785 Wrote:Here goes; It has banded shading, it hasn't got enough contrast, you didn't shade based on the shape... and that's it also the colours are... ok

Like this?

Also added pallete

Less Pillowing, more Contrast, a better shape, and some hue shifting.


Stuff that's needed.

pikspiksmaroator Wrote:Less Pillowing, more Contrast, a better shape, and some hue shifting.


Stuff that's needed.

Got it, right now I am gonna take a break from spriting though, Now on my to do list.

Made new shape (In front view) just wan to be sure it is alright before I go in to detail, also ignore second pallete. (also I added crits on sheet for reminder)

Bigger torso, plz, arms look too straight and edgy, make them smoother and curvy.

I don't see any thing bad about it... wait, don't Starmen have pointy heads, or is that just one kind of Starman?

No they don't have pointy heads. :/

None of 'em? Hmph must be a different Starman I'm thinking of then...

BTW-Starman kicks ass!

Better. His body should be wider, and I like the second palette BTW.

Though it still needs more contrast.

Meh, still could use more contrast.... Also new pallette. (And yet I can barely tell if I shaded it good since it's a bit small)