05-25-2014, 11:42 AM
05-25-2014, 11:45 AM
They looks okay. Maybe you could add some shading to these sprites to give them more depth?
Also, I just noticed that the lower part of the shirt and the upper part of the pants is a straight line. Could you curve it a bit?
Also, I just noticed that the lower part of the shirt and the upper part of the pants is a straight line. Could you curve it a bit?
05-25-2014, 11:47 AM
(05-25-2014, 11:45 AM)E-Man Wrote: [ -> ]They looks okay. Maybe you could add some shading to these sprites to give them more depth?
I'll try that, though I'm not very good at the shading business.
05-25-2014, 01:50 PM
Added shading
(I'm getting DoS game vibes from it...)
05-25-2014, 05:23 PM
The muzzle should have some shading too, and the left (his left) should have some shading on the inside, too, as well as the areas under the arms. I think the top of the toes should be lit; try it and see. Also, his pinkie looks like it's coming out of his ring finger.
Very cute, by the way. Is he a rabbit? Or a fennec with the tail not drawn yet?
Very cute, by the way. Is he a rabbit? Or a fennec with the tail not drawn yet?
05-25-2014, 06:20 PM
(05-25-2014, 05:23 PM)Midi Wrote: [ -> ]The muzzle should have some shading too, and the left (his left) should have some shading on the inside, too, as well as the areas under the arms. I think the top of the toes should be lit; try it and see. Also, his pinkie looks like it's coming out of his ring finger.
Very cute, by the way. Is he a rabbit? Or a fennec with the tail not drawn yet?
*SHE'S* a rabbit X3
05-25-2014, 06:26 PM
Oh, she, sorry. I was kinda hoping you'd say fennec, though, since if she's a rabbit, then her anatomy is way off. Her legs should be plantigrade (walking on the heel) and not digitgrade (walking on the toes). I see this mistake made often, especially with lapines and rodents.
05-27-2014, 06:58 AM
I have made another character, changed Haiiro's shading and made her shape *a bit* more like a female