Been a while since I posted on here last. Been having issues irl.
That said, I believe I improved from the last time, I guess.
It's been a while since I've posted here, BUT:
Lamont Sanford and my character Jonah strumming a messed up guitar.
Dead Hand from Ocarina of Time. Tried to do creepy stuff.
Reign trying to blend in and failing.
I think your work would benefit from better photos - a cleaner paper, with even lighting would make your work pop out so much more!
Halloween comes early this year.
I'm not quite satisfied with the ReDeads in the window. So I've decided to redo it. Should be up soon.
(09-14-2016, 03:03 AM)Chris2Balls [:B] Wrote: [ -> ]I think your work would benefit from better photos - a cleaner paper, with even lighting would make your work pop out so much more!
Assuming this comment was aimed at me- I agree and thanks for ointing that out. I made the drawings at nighttime so I only had articifical light available at the time, I should probably start investing in a decent scanner.
Some digital art;
your drawing is good and the idea is good but you should learn that editing the colors of your drawing will make it weld better with the BG photo
The drawing is very saturated and cartoonish, and it does look good on its own, but it looks bad with the BG. Try making it more unsaturated so it matches with the environment. Remember that shading is dependant on the environment, too.
Okay, since DA is being a pansy, I'm just going to upload them here:
Doopliss from Paper Mario The Thousand-Year Door.
The redone ReDead drawing I promised.
Jester from Super Mario RPG Legend of the Seven Stars.
Broozer from New Super Mario Bros.
I forgot a few, since I just drew them.
Plague Doctor (Darkest Dungeon)
Painwheel (Skullgirls)
Did I ever post this? I just wanna say I drew this with a lot of passion. I really wanted to draw an exaggerated face with goes and love drawing action scenes. My favorite part has to be the hand firing the Kamehameha. I feel like my life was complete after drawing that. Not the best but I wanted to get that shape down. (The hand in the main image thats small, not the one in the zoom in lol. Yes the tiny squiggles)
(09-22-2016, 03:08 PM)StevenB Wrote: [ -> ]
BRUh thre is a MASSIVE TYPO here. the copyright date is way off. its more like Copyright 1935
though if you're going for the penultimate old-timey theater presentation and don't mind updating it a little,
I'd suggest centering it and presenting it like
EGGPLANT PRODUCTIONS, LTD
PRESENTS
THE GHOST
GUMSHOES
AN EGGPLANT MOTION PICTURE
Written By
S.T. EVEN
COPYRIGHT MCMXCV
goin for that cinephone aesthetic i see B)
p.s. MCMXCV is "1995" in roman numerals, like every silent cartoon and their uncle labeled their copyright info way back then
(09-22-2016, 11:13 PM)Kosheh Wrote: [ -> ]BRUh thre is a MASSIVE TYPO here. the copyright date is way off. its more like Copyright 1935
though if you're going for the penultimate old-timey theater presentation and don't mind updating it a little,
I'd suggest centering it and presenting it like
EGGPLANT PRODUCTIONS, LTD
PRESENTS
THE GHOST
GUMSHOES
AN EGGPLANT MOTION PICTURE
Written By
S.T. EVEN
COPYRIGHT MCMXCV
goin for that cinephone aesthetic i see B)
p.s. MCMXCV is "1995" in roman numerals, like every silent cartoon and their uncle labeled their copyright info way back then
LOL I was wondering if someone would comment on that. 1995 is the year in which I was born, which is why I added it but you are right it's way off-course, it should be like 1930s or so haha.
I added the misc. text on the bottom because it was like that in the title card of Mickey's Service Station (which I referenced), though truth be told that titlecard has a more wholesome design to justify the placement so I may actually adjust it yeah (copyright year included);
In general this was more for me to focus on getting overlays to work in SAI so the text was thrown in as an afterthought because I want to practise lettering later, but I'll take it to heart. I think me needing to center text more is sort of a common problem though, so your comment and feedback is definetly justified. I may also steal S. T. Even as a new pen name lol