08-10-2014, 07:14 AM
08-10-2014, 12:14 PM
These look really cool!
08-10-2014, 10:11 PM
I'm trying to fix up the Kritter. His pose looks awkward.
Oh and I took people's advice from last time and adjusted the colors better.
Oh and I took people's advice from last time and adjusted the colors better.
08-10-2014, 11:09 PM
A few things:
~It's kinda hard to make out Zinger's legs and antennae against the black parts, you could probably make them a tad lighter without going too off-model
~Gnawty's shading is weird. Do you have a general lightsource for the enemy sprites? Kritter's seems to suggest that the light is coming from above, but with Gnawty's you can't tell and it looks as if he has multiple lightsources even
~You could fix Kritter's pose by turning his feet a bit more toward us
~I also think that maybe Kritter's lower stomach should be shaded in the middle to imply leaning over since the area around it is shaded
~It's kinda hard to make out Zinger's legs and antennae against the black parts, you could probably make them a tad lighter without going too off-model
~Gnawty's shading is weird. Do you have a general lightsource for the enemy sprites? Kritter's seems to suggest that the light is coming from above, but with Gnawty's you can't tell and it looks as if he has multiple lightsources even
~You could fix Kritter's pose by turning his feet a bit more toward us
~I also think that maybe Kritter's lower stomach should be shaded in the middle to imply leaning over since the area around it is shaded
08-11-2014, 10:45 PM
Thanks for the advice. How's this?
Now that I'm looking at it. Zinger's colors haven't been fixed.
Now that I'm looking at it. Zinger's colors haven't been fixed.
08-13-2014, 08:52 AM
I prefer the original Kritter pose, they're normally shown with hands hanging to the side and feet shifting outward.
The other two look fine.
The other two look fine.
08-16-2014, 05:03 AM
Okay I sort of combined the two.
02-09-2015, 01:00 AM
Major bump. I need a lot of help. These guys look awful, especially Klaptrap. I can't draw a crocodilian face from that angle. Any advice?