This is a obvious rip off of the thread thats been bumped twice so far in sprite submission, I was somehwhat inspired by it so I thought why not and made my own Paper Mario Kirby, its not that great and was made just for spriting practice.
![[Image: pmkirbygy8.png]](http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/1303/pmkirbygy8.png)
As you can see I used the KSSU Kirby as a basis for the sprite, I dont plan on making it a huge sheet or submiting it at all, but who knows I might continue to work on it if people think it's good enough.
oh ya and C+C would be nice.
Cool! I think it's better than the other Paper Mario Kirby!
Arms are too blocky on the sucking animation...
The color choice is alright, considering the darkness of PM sprites.
The outline seems a little to thick/thin at some points on the standing part...
Something to do with the top of his head.
Might be too flat as well on top.
Make him round and pudgy. : D
generally in style, but as odball said, the arms on the sucking-in animation look to blocky or straight.
Dear God, I'm going to punch the next person to attempt a PM Kirby.
Through the INTERNET.
His left arm is positioned and angled incorrectly.
The face doesn't appear to carry the characteristics of the style--Make it bigger, and bring the mouth closer to the rest of the face. Kirby's mouth isn't that distant from his eyes.
Cheeks too thin and small.
The shading is nonexistent/basically invisible.
Sucking mouth is blocky.
Arms in sucking blocking.
Left arm (Our right) in the sucking animation is positioned and angled incorrectly.\
Face position in the same sucking anim is off. For every frame.
Arms in sucking anim should move and twitch.
Same for feet, though not nearly as much.
hey can someone get me a link to this my computer won't show the picture!!!
(11-04-2008, 08:50 AM)pokeman Wrote: [ -> ]hey can someone get me a link to this my computer won't show the picture!!!
the link expired
nobody can see it
so no i don't think anyone can give you the link to it!!!