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I'm sorry if this is off topic... May I use the POW for a custom sheet I'm making?
(12-16-2008, 09:19 PM)gorsal Wrote: [ -> ]Nice, katakana below the sprite... only... you made a lot of mistakes. You forgot to add dakuten (the '') in Kuribo (Goomba) and Patakuribo (Paragoomba). Also, your 'ta' is wrong. It should have a horizontal slash inside the three slashes. The 'pa' in Patapata (Paratroopa) is lacking a han dakuten (the °) and your 'ge' in Jugemu (Lakitu) looks like a 'gu'. The 'pu' in Choropuu (Monty Mole) looks like a 'bu' because it looks like a dakuten. You wrote Gesso (Blooper) as "Gu'nn" because your 'ge' looks like 'gu' (said before) and 'so' looks like a 'n'. Also, you could make the sokuon (small tsu) smaller.

Yeah, I realize that now. The problem is that the text is so small. I made the katakana text myself, and tried to keep it within size limits, so I'm sure there are mistakes perhaps you can help me edit them?

@ARefractedSwindler

For the future, PM someone to ask them for something. Don't do it in a topic.



Anyway...

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As you can see I'm taking my time. Christmas is slowing me down. But I'd like to know what you think of the Koopas?
Looks good! REALLY good! Are there other Koopa versions that'll use the same "base sprites"?, 'cuz those look awesome!

As do the Boo and Dry Bones sprites, of course.
I'm not too happy with Lakitu's cloud. Any suggestions?

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Oh man, Dry Bones is rad.

Koopa's cheek looks odd, though. Lakitu's cloud is alright, but it looks a tad too symmetrical? Lookin' good anyway!
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