looks better! Since the hair is made up of robotic parts, I suggest using more shading to highlight the shapes more.
I don't exactly know which way to go in making the hair look more metallic, but I tried
it's an improvement! I like it
zadaben's icon looks bad though due to the asymmetrical lineart, i think you should work on it a little more
the design direction I'm going for is the appearance of a pulp comic book both from covers and pages. Other times, I'll try my hand at trying to capture the minimalistic yet softly colored Art Deco posters... This is one of those WIP drawings
What do you all think?
The Parakeet in lovely blue monochrome