I made this custom boo today. If you look back at the old shyguy I tried to do you will see that this is much better!
<breathe deep>
1. Lines are jagged. AA does not help make it smooth at all. First, clean up lines, AA later.
2. Needs to be rounder. He's basically a ball with two arms and a tail. Work from that.
3. No shading at all on the body, but shading on the tongue. Why?
4. Overall, generally messy.
How can it be too small in a custom style that only has one character sprited in it...
It looks more like a white blob than
Boo, he needs to be less blocky, the outlines are also too dark.
Hmm thats a lot to work with, thanks for all the replies.