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KIRBY'S BACK, BABY

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that's right! you heard me! the kirby dream land remake project is back B)

ill be honest, its been 2 years since i have touched most of these sprites. however, i have been reworking some of kirbys animations and made a new palette. the only problem now is just to recolor all sprites with new said palette and work can finally resume.

as for what needs to be worked on, its generally just reworking some animations and sprites, as they are inconsistent with... pretty much everything else. ill be providing a list of that as soon as these sprites are recolored.

here's the sheet:

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if you have any questions, just ask away in this thread and ill be sure to answer

PERFECT FREAKEN TIMING RECBOY!

Just give me til Wednesday for a operational computer

reworking meta knight, a lil. left is new one

Some really, really nice Sprite work!

There is some things off about it, to me.

Kirby's eyes should be a pixel higher? They look too small for his face. Also, some clarity on his mouth in the "Full poses" can be done a bit better. Meta Knight's mask should be raised one pixel?

Here's just a showcase of what I mean. My Kirby changes are on the left.

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I was working on a fish but then I got bored

Man these are awesome. I hope you finish this.

I have some small crits/opinions. Sorry Sad

Based on what I read in the first post you may be reworking some of these anyway.

1. maxim tomato has too much shading to my eyes, its a round object so the shades should be limited more (compare to say, kirby himself, or bronto).

2. Is there any way to make the entire bomb clearer on that box?

3. The details on the purple jelly bean guy (forgot his name, on top right) are very hard to read because of that dark purple, maybe you can try lightening it.

4. Mumbies' shading is kind of odd too. The shading doesn't match his shape and you might want to try darker shades. On this and my other monitor it almost looks plain white.

5. The far foot on frame 5, 6 and 7 Kirby's walk animation just looks a bit odd to me but I'm not sure why. I don't think it would be showing the entire foot at that angle? Maybe that's it.

thanks for the crits guys. will make said changes, though, i should be clear on something.

im not sure that i said it in the op, but like, this is a GROUP project. so like, if you think something looks off, then you can go ahead and fix it. just saying haha

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