So I'm gonna be honest with you and say these have some issues. The first thing that really needs to be addressed is the lack of actual content and way too much unnecessary space on your sheets. For example:
There's no reason this:
can't be this:
I removed the obnoxiously large text and unnecessary descriptions, as well as the large amount of blank space. It makes it more condensed and less amateurish, for lack of better word. This could be applied to every sheet you've showed off so far.
Thanks for the feedback, Shade it is my first time ripping sprites so I'm gonna try to improve on the sheets like you have stated. Do you think it would be a lot more organized if I just put all my rips in one post instead of triple posting?
That's fine but not totally necessary. Lots of people do a mixture of both where they update their original post as well as make a new post with whatever new content they have to show off. Completely up to you how you wanna do it.
Those first two sheets also look like they could be merged together, since they're both map elements.
(11-12-2018, 08:26 PM)Magma Dragoon Wrote: [ -> ]Those first two sheets also look like they could be merged together, since they're both map elements.
Good suggestion I'll do that.
Don't worry if your sheets aren't the greatest if you're just starting out. Just take people's advice if they point out something wrong with the sheet.
That portrait sheet doesn't look bad either.