I will be adding more shading,etc and more detail but here it is
C+C Please, I will be updating with other FF7 stuff maybe
I think you need to fix his hair.
Yeah i can agree with that i couldn't find a good image of his hair without getting the sword in the way. This image i found was one of him in battle after being damaged
I am working on a Cloud FF3 8 bit sprite now
You have: anatomical issues (long strange legs, tube arms, short small torso and no neck). There's also no shading. The colours are very saturated, the stance is awkward. Just keep on trying and you'll manage.