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Since my submissions were rejected, I will submit them on the forum.
I've never even seen most of these. What are the Diddy/Dixie ones from? Are they GBA sprites recolored to the SNES palette?
(12-07-2024, 10:59 AM)Ton Wrote: [ -> ]I've never even seen most of these. What are the Diddy/Dixie ones from? Are they GBA sprites recolored to the SNES palette?

Yes.
(12-07-2024, 10:59 AM)Ton Wrote: [ -> ]I've never even seen most of these. What are the Diddy/Dixie ones from? Are they GBA sprites recolored to the SNES palette?

I had placed the body bases on Spriters-Resource. But they were rejected without notifying me.
Every rejection sends an email notifying you when and why they were rejected.
(12-09-2024, 08:50 AM)Ton Wrote: [ -> ]Every rejection sends an email notifying you when and why they were rejected.

Exactly. I will send the body bases for the third time. If they are rejected without notifying me, I will let you know.


(12-09-2024, 08:50 AM)Ton Wrote: [ -> ]Every rejection sends an email notifying you when and why they were rejected.

I send 3 Body Bases today and they were already rejected without notifying me.
(12-09-2024, 08:50 AM)Ton Wrote: [ -> ]Every rejection sends an email notifying you when and why they were rejected.

I don't know what's going on. Because every time I submit it's being rejected without notifying me.
Talking to the admins about this.
Another selection of sprites that was rejected in "The Spriters Resource" and send it here. These sprites are from "Lord Fredrik".
This sheet is too muddy, crowded, stiff, pillow shaded, and off model. 

I'd suggest limiting your color palette by a LOT. 

I played with it a smidge to make it more readable, but I gave up on reshading. I also sketched out a body that looks more proportional.

[Image: 3gIglOb.png]
Use as much or as little of this as you want.
(12-18-2024, 12:17 PM)Ton Wrote: [ -> ]This sheet is too muddy, crowded, stiff, pillow shaded, and off model. 

I'd suggest limiting your color palette by a LOT. 

I played with it a smidge to make it more readable, but I gave up on reshading. I also sketched out a body that looks more proportional.

[Image: 3gIglOb.png]
Use as much or as little of this as you want.

I'll try another time. Can you put this image in normal size? Because I have a program that can duplicate the layer and draw on top of it.
If you shrink it by 50% twice, it'll be back to the regular pixel size.
I bring 4 body bases here.
[Image: e3581b23fcf6221b6f98aef9a6842f18.png]

I've got a few suggestions on this guy. I did a redo to help illustrate some of my points.
  • You need to keep the outline's contrast consistent with each other. Blue has a dark outline, Orange has a middle ground, and white has no contrast between the colors chosen. 
  • The eyes are cute, but they don't reflect the character (I THINK, this is the penguin from Donkey Kong right?)
  • Flipping the foot like that works in some 8bit abstraction, but I think changing the perspective of the foot will give more depth to the piece.
  • Lastly, pic a light source direction and stick with it. Some of your sprite looks shading from top-right and other parts it feels more directly above.
(12-19-2024, 05:43 PM)Izzi Wrote: [ -> ][Image: e3581b23fcf6221b6f98aef9a6842f18.png]

I've got a few suggestions on this guy. I did a redo to help illustrate some of my points.
  • You need to keep the outline's contrast consistent with each other. Blue has a dark outline, Orange has a middle ground, and white has no contrast between the colors chosen. 
  • The eyes are cute, but they don't reflect the character (I THINK, this is the penguin from Donkey Kong right?)
  • Flipping the foot like that works in some 8bit abstraction, but I think changing the perspective of the foot will give more depth to the piece.
  • Lastly, pic a light source direction and stick with it. Some of your sprite looks shading from top-right and other parts it feels more directly above.

I don't know how to make sprites like you and Tom do. Unsure I make sprites in pieces. You and Ton exceeded my expectations. Surprise You can create the selection of Tucks, Fluffs, Waldoughs, Hootzes and Lemmington. Even Lord Fredrik.
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