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Wart dosen't have the body structure of bowser. He looks like a bowser edit. Wart is actually really fat.

(02-21-2009, 07:44 PM)Skink Wrote: [ -> ]Wart dosen't have the body structure of bowser. He looks like a bowser edit. Wart is actually really fat.

Exactly this.

Imageshack isn't working, so:

It looks a little messy in places

It's starting to look a little better.

Maybe raise his top lip a little more. If he's going to have that facial expression, he needs to show his front teeth a little more.

not bad :D

just two things...make the darks darker and make him even fatter (as in much fatter). the shading does look a little strange, but i'd work on the proportions before worrying about shading.

Emphasize his girth by showing an partial outline of it over his legs

NOTE: Joke sprite ahead.

I suggest you just start over and use this image as a reference. Do not edit him out of Bowser. Their physiques are nothing alike.

(02-22-2009, 02:49 PM)Shouty Wrote: [ -> ]I suggest you just start over and use this image as a reference. Do not edit him out of Bowser. Their physiques are nothing alike.

...I'm not even using Bowser as a base anymore.

So folks, should I use the new one, or any criticisms?

The new one looks pretty good. Perhaps the outline looks a bit too thick, but perhaps that's just how the style is. I'm not really familiar with ML3, I can't even see the difference between ML and ML2, but it looks pretty solid.

Here a check list of what you need to fixed.
I can't see the inside of the eyes(too dark)(make a ball in a light color).
Eyebrows are to blending make them darker so they don't look like that.
Out line is too thick
Bottom of his belly is a bit too dark.

It might be just me, but I always thought that this was how the eyes looked like. As in, there is no "inside" of his eyes, because this is basically what his eyes look like.