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Looks pillowshaded, the blue and brown (hammer) need to be more vivid.

(01-18-2010, 02:33 AM)Bazzoka Wrote: [ -> ]Me thinks the main problem of the sprite is the fact that the outlines inside the sprite are sttill as black. I'm not seeing that much in the other sprites. :V

^This hard.

i see what everyone means ill take another crack at it in a bit

edits;

is this any better if not some else give it a try

Heh, it seems like everytime I try an edit someone else gets there faster and does it better than I do. The shading is great, but the linework still seems like a sketch. It needs to be a little bit smoother. Out of all the chars in brawl, DeDeDe is one of the cartooniest. He looks rougher than both DK and Bowser. I can't put my finger on all the problems, but I know one of them is the hammer. Something just bugs me about it.

(01-18-2010, 09:23 PM)Airicy Wrote: [ -> ]Heh, it seems like everytime I try an edit someone else gets there faster and does it better than I do. The shading is great, but the linework still seems like a sketch. It needs to be a little bit smoother. Out of all the chars in brawl, DeDeDe is one of the cartooniest. He looks rougher than both DK and Bowser. I can't put my finger on all the problems, but I know one of them is the hammer. Something just bugs me about it.

its too small

It looks way too dirty

(01-18-2010, 09:58 PM)Phantom K Wrote: [ -> ]It looks way too dirty

i see what you mean he is harder than he looks

Amen.
I figured it'd be one of the easiest ones. D;

i gave it another try hows it look now

Not entirely happy with what I have so far, but I think this is closer to what we're going for

(01-20-2010, 10:44 PM)Phantom K Wrote: [ -> ]Not entirely happy with what I have so far, but I think this is closer to what we're going for

looks good but the mouth looks kinda ridged

yeah, the mouth and hat are pretty bad, and it needs general work everywhere

i don't know why but he seems impossible to get right

fixed up the mouth

(01-20-2010, 11:00 PM)Phantom K Wrote: [ -> ]
fixed up the mouth

nice but there's one pixel that needs darken up on his mouth cause it looks like a tooth