Hah, yeah it does. Looking better though!
Whoops, I made an edit of Dedede before I saw all your new posts. (PK's edit)
Well, here he is:
It's certainly not perfect (espacially the hammer), but I hope it'll you (whoever is going to sheet him)
Wow, that's pretty great. The hammer could use some tweaking like you said, but that's a great start!
was about half way done when I saw Zabi's, a lot of mine was influenced by his design and a couple things were taken directly from his
I like Zabi's eyes more, but everything above the hammer on yours looks more vibrant and better-shaded. Your feet are good too, but his belly could look a bit rounder, I think.
Looks great, almost there. The hammer detail still bothers me, but the shape is perfect. It's a little better than Zabi's as far as the style of the project goes, but the inside of the eyes bother me. Maybe make them mor full or straight-forward looking, like Zabi's. But other than that, like I said, is great. Almost there.
Gave him Zabi eyes, tried to make him rounder
Looks a lot better now imo
I think he's leaning back too much. His body should make a shape like this /\ but right now its sort of like this |\
Looks better, now just take Wes's advice and you're golden.
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Wonderful, wonderful. Now the hammer is all that remains.
:l
def. needs some refining but pretty good start so far