03-02-2011, 01:18 AM
03-02-2011, 03:35 AM
it's great
try to angle the other wing, though. it looks like it was copy-pasted. i know it wasn't, but it looks it.
try to angle the other wing, though. it looks like it was copy-pasted. i know it wasn't, but it looks it.
03-02-2011, 06:33 AM
More like this ?
03-02-2011, 11:05 AM
Love it. Talk about a great way to get instant respect.
03-02-2011, 11:46 AM
Face looks slightly off, but awesome otherwise
03-02-2011, 09:07 PM
(03-01-2011, 08:57 PM)Cookie Wrote: [ -> ]
Made some improvements in Wes's Charizard, hope you like it.
Also, i'm not sure about the different colors, but the palette is very restraining, feel free to correct ^^
Can we all just pretend every other Charizard in this thread never existed?
03-03-2011, 12:26 AM
That's a great start, but I'm not a fan of the fire effect on the tail. I mean, not the effect itself, but it looks a little painted on in the background whereas charizard usually has the fire block out or partially block out the tip of his tail so that it seems like the fire is apart of the tail itself. It might work out fine without blocking things out but I think at least the tail and flame should point in the same general direction because they're not really supposed to act independently of each other, from what I've looked at.
The face is cartoony and bright which isn't really bad but brawl charizard tends to look pretty mean and serious, so it'd probably be better to change it to keep its character
and something about the arms, legs and belly pattern are making me feel like something's off center. I think it might be his right (from his perspective) leg is too far over...?
The face is cartoony and bright which isn't really bad but brawl charizard tends to look pretty mean and serious, so it'd probably be better to change it to keep its character
and something about the arms, legs and belly pattern are making me feel like something's off center. I think it might be his right (from his perspective) leg is too far over...?
03-03-2011, 11:21 AM
if you move his right arm and leg a bit to the front, i think it'd be ready for animating.
also on the fire, i'm actually satisfied with how it is atm. just make sure it moves with his tail, ie when he sweeps his tail forward, the flame flickers back.
we need more opinions on this.
also on the fire, i'm actually satisfied with how it is atm. just make sure it moves with his tail, ie when he sweeps his tail forward, the flame flickers back.
we need more opinions on this.
03-03-2011, 11:32 AM
The flame should be atop the tail edge
03-03-2011, 03:13 PM
I think his brow is a bit too large. Nice job otherwise.
03-04-2011, 01:19 PM
Really? I think it looks fine
03-04-2011, 01:26 PM
Am I really the only one really bothered by the head? The eyes and the snout are like on different perspectives or something making the top half of the head look super bulky. The head looks fine when you get rid of the further side of it or if you changed the snout. But changing the snout to suit the rest of the head would make the head way too big. I dunno the head just really bothers me. :/
03-05-2011, 05:41 AM
Actually, now that I look at it the head is slightly out of proportion. It's weird, because it seems to fit the body fine, but still looks out (of place) somehow
03-05-2011, 05:16 PM
Hows this?
03-05-2011, 05:20 PM
Will that tail not be too complicated to animate?