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(06-01-2010, 10:56 AM)Alpha Six Wrote: [ -> ]That head is awfully squished...

This. Almost looks like a sideways watermelon. Perhaps you should take a look at some of the other posts to find that his jaw shortness needs to be fixed. Yours looks pretty eliptical.

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Ugly. The face seems too stretched out and his nose looks ridiculous

Still really squished.
And why are his left and right legs on the same foreground line?

I believe I have it now.

His face. He looks *so* happy now! ^o^

... Yeah, that doesn't work. Maybe shrink his eyes a tiny bit. Refer to one of the earlier Marth sprites for a good eye size.

better?

A bit better, yes, though he still doesn't quite look as mean as he usually does.

Here a few edits to make him look a bit more fierce, as well as a few different edits to the face in an attempt to make him look even more like Snake.

(06-01-2010, 05:20 PM)Sploder Wrote: [ -> ]A bit better, yes, though he still doesn't quite look as mean as he usually does.

Here a few edits to make him look a bit more fierce, as well as a few different edits to the face in an attempt to make him look even more like Snake.

my fav is 3 so far the rest reminds me of chuck norris

Exactly what I was thinking. Pull his eye forward a pixel.

Wow, so much work going on here to Snake, I like this!!!

I think his chin should be squarer.

3 is definitely looking best to me. The eyes are bolder, but smaller. Nice. *No intentional rhymes there - Seriously*

And I really don't think the chin needs to be more square. I'm comparing the sprite to a picture of him in Brawl, and the head shape (especially around the chin) is fine.

Those eyes are staring at me through the computer on four. D :
I still think three is good, but you should incorporate the 'not having a perfect circle on the top of your head' idea to three.