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Ok, I made this Larxene from Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories.


C+C, please A_A

Back of his/her (why can't Square characters have real genders?) skirt/coat is rather jaggy.
Feet look a bit odd to.

It's a she xD
I think the part you say that is jaggy is what supposed to be her hood. Guess it didn't work out very nicely.

And I was never really good with feet anyway, but I'll try to fix it.

The hood seems to be too small to see from the front when not worn, so I wouldn't worry about representing it. I think her hair is a bit too saturated - she's more 'platinum' than that.

I didn't quite understand that
What's saturated?

(02-27-2009, 03:40 PM)Cesar Wrote: [ -> ]I didn't quite understand that
What's saturated?

Her hair, he meant it's too yellow.

Ohh, got it.
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Here it is. Took out the hood, changed the hair's color and changed the feet. =)

Much better, although her old left foot (the one pointing outwards) is better than the old one. It's a minor thing though.

yes larxene is a "she"...
it's not very major, but to me the coat near her legs looks kinda off... idk, if you just look at it it just looks off. what I can see though is it does need some smoothing out down there, and thats about it.

Ok... What exactly looks strange about it? @_@

maybe my eyes are getting bad... it looks a little bit baggy/ big, there we go. and it needs to be smoothed out, then there ya have it!

Like this?

yeah... there we go. now, smooth out her right leg (leg facing us) and it will be perfect.

But smooth her right leg, where, exactly?

this edge: