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The ears seem awfully high on her head. Try lowering them a bit.

the ears are right where they are, except they are way too far from the eyes(as they are now, they're almost at the back of her head). try moving them a bit foward, like this maybe. also the neck necks awfully thick for a female(althoug considering its suposed to be an athletic body, it ends being a matter of aesthetic preferences). also wondering if the shape of the skull is intentional, since her forehead its way too tall as it is now.

are you using areference for this?

Yes I'm using references, EvilEye's edit at Pixelation and a link to a book thing from Arachne.

This is coming along beautifully. The hair on her head is going to be tough... Good luck.

Why thankyou, and yes the hair is going to be tough, especially considering I NEVER shade hair. I hate it.

its easier than it may sound, except maybe if you're going for a realistic look, in wich case yes i'd understand you'd hate it.

PS: mind sharing the ref?

EvilEye's edit and this book, a lot of great references in there. Arachne's edit helped a ton too.

slight edit. between the upper lip and nose was too long imo.

kind of stoppde editting because your lightsource is confusing the hell out of me, the eyes say its upper left, but you shaded the mouth and nose like its form the right.

nose coudl be defined more

It bugs me when I don't notice things as obvious as that :l
But thanks, helpful edit.

those eyes qere quite lifeless... And i changed the mouth.


EDIT: WHOA! wow. That´s what happens when you refresh not before posting, lol!

I like what you did with the eyes, gives them a much deeper look.

I agree this is coming out really great the picture colors is very easy and delightfull on the eyes and the shading makes it better finish this~~!!

Refinement

Her cheeks seem unaligned, with her left cheek lower than her right. I google'd images of faces and I do think that you should lower the right cheek a bit.

daaaaaaaaamn, this came a long long way.