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your main issue with your animation is lack of momentum, this showed in your pipe works sprites and they also show up here.

when making an animation, don't focus on making a ton of frames. Animation is not about making a frame, moving the subject 1 cm, and redraw another frame. Play with the timing and the subject's movement. Whereas you're making this:

you could be making this:


The difference of the gaps between animations is what gives animation soul; otherwise they'll be smooth, but not realistic at all (sure, you aren't going for realism here, but this extra detail makes all the difference, trust me)

Alright so today I will focus on frame timing as Gors (as well as Frar) pointed out.

It's a little silly and messy but the main point here is to begin to understand the different times frames should last for.
I'll edit this post later as I make more.

or maybe i'll just make a topic.

Pac-Man, meet Pac-Man

You're really improving Troller!

Coloring practice for poops and giggles

just goofin' off

I was gonna add more characters but I got bored before that happened.

(07-17-2013, 05:18 PM)Trollerskates Wrote: [ -> ]
Coloring practice for poops and giggles

I'm sure you're more worried about the colors, but the shadow the nose casts is in the opposite direction it should be C
actually I don't really understand your lightsource.

I'd recommend making the shadow on the eyes have a pink or blue tint though--you rarely find completely desaturated shadows.

Didn't feel like doing much of anything last night so I doodled a thing in SAI.

line control improvement : D

You can thank the stabilizer for that.

Sorry for jpeg, it's all that the 3DS exports.

Don't know why I did this, but I liek it.

"Please don't drop me"

Not using all the colours obviously just learning to work Sai

EDIT: Oh God Fucking Damn It, the Sai God posted above me.

I'm dying, cause of how Luigi is looking up at my post.